Monday, May 25, 2020

100 word challenge week 1

Once upon a time there was a river with stones all threw it and up above the river were some tree branches on the trees three were insects. There was a little golden retriever called Goldie. He was wandering round the river lost and scared. Until one day this little girl called Alice came along and said mum can I take goldie home, she found the name because it was on the collar. Her mum said of course we can take Goldie home. Dad would love Goldie. There Dad died when Alice was three years old. Yay I love Goldie.





1 comment:

  1. What a touching story, Emily. It has its sad moments, but mostly it is uplifting. You manage to fit a lot in to a short story. I particularly like the sentence ‘He was wandering round the river lost and scared’. It is a short sentence but it is very effective. I also like the way you explain how you know his name.

    Janet Team 100WC

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